Talk:Great Tower

Introductory paragraph

When writing an introductory paragraph for a longer article, I try to make it a short, general summation of the entire article, one which makes sense on its own. I try not to include small details, but try to keep it a "long shot" to use a film term, so that the reader gets a brief overview of what the article is about. I also assume that the person reading the article knows nothing about the subject and has read no other "related" articles (such as articles about the same general area).
The reason I mention this, is because in the intro paragraph for the Great Tower, it mentions nearby streets and refers to a "region", but does not state which region; for that information one has to read the article. I think it would be clearer to take out the mention of the streets, and simply refer to the city and perhaps the neighborhood the tower is located in, with maybe a short reference as to its size or history, just a short taste to get the reader interested in finding out more below. --Brandingopportunity 19:16, 31 January 2011 (UTC)