Talk:King Xeros

Cleanup

This is a very thorough article and one that we should work to mimic. That said, there are a lot of grammatical errors here that need ironing out. I fixed a few instances of passive voice but there are still a lot left. Additionally, the article assumes a lot in terms of the current reader's year, so words like "ago" and "recently" should be removed. -- yoda8myhead 01:37, October 25, 2009 (UTC)