Talk:Kyonin

I reworked a few sections (government, geography, inhabitants), mostly rewriting to avoid awkward phrasing and (very occasional) grammatical errors. --Icfasntw 07:10, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

It's really appreciated. These types of copy-editing changes are desperately needed all over the project, so anything you can do to help goes farther along than you might think. Welcome to the project, and don't hesitate to contact me if you have any questions (though it seems you have a general grasp of what you're doing). — yoda8myhead 07:16, December 11, 2009 (UTC)