Talk:Miraina Olviris

Readability

I don't understand, HTD, the following sentence: 'For the next few years, Miraina visited Tumbaja Mountain and directly studied the dead kumaru tree that once provided for it.' How does a tree 'provide' for a mountain? I don't want to spoil this by reading too far into this, but noticed this line you'd written at Tumbaja Mountain: 'The most powerful of them, the kumaru tree, was grown in Tumbaja Mountain's high central chamber, nourished by magic.' This suggests the mountain provided for the tree not the other way round. I am confused. Can you have a crack at rewording please to make it clearer? --Fleanetha (talk) 17:30, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

That 'it' is supposed to refer to the Veins of Creation, not Tumbaja Mountain. I have fixed the wording now. (As an aside, nothing in this article as written is spoilers.) - HTD (talk) 00:03, 29 October 2019 (UTC)